Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Colloquial Rhyming












I got up in the morning

I dreamt her smiling face


I like, I care, I feel for you

Can’t you see it?

It’s a proved translucent case


I love her smiling

As that’s the only tablet of revitalizing


So I went to her place to see her smile

As she‘s on the Zenith I got to know back while


I called her and said I am coming, on my way

She said

Oh!! U are free now

I thought u are too occupied

And why you even bothering yourself by the way


I interrupted and said I am in love with every word you say

With her devoted coyness she asked by what time

you’ll be here by the way


I said I am standing downstairs at your place

She was zapped

Replied wait

I said baby you know its 68 kgs

She said ahh!!

You are a tasteless taste


I said your smile is the only reason I am chasing you in this alluring race

She saw me from window and said ‘today also you forgot to tie your lace’


I replied

I like, I care, I feel for you

Can’t you see it?

It’s a proved translucent case


She ironically answered

Oh!! Now I got it

You thinking yourself a bard



She Said

I am coming don’t you dare to smoke

I said bird it is the fire who provokes smoke

She said what you mean I am a fire

I said no baby

You are my nightingale who transformed me into a ‘shayar’


She came downstairs.

She smiled, stared and then she hugged me

I smelt her god!! She smells heavenly


I said you know how beautiful you look

Allow me to read all chapters of your book



She said

Yap!!

That’s why you look high, out of your source

See how fearless I was

I asked

Why you girls take so much time in changing your clothes ??


Pin drop silence

I got my answer via her baleful hum and via shook of her nose

I smiled and hugged her again

Coz m addicted to that dose


She started talking and I listened,listened her intensity of joy

That’s the basic difference b/w a girl and a boy

For next 20 mins she spoke & gave me lot of tips

And I was simply looking those seductive lips


We Walked




In the mean while I said

You are a capricious lady

Who always drives me crazy?



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After some unforgettable hours



It was morning, time to leave

I hugged, kissed her forehead

We stared each other

She said

Love you baby

Hope to meet you soon

I Smiled and Replied

I love u too sweetie

Be with me

I promise I’ll take you to the moon

She hugged me again and said

I am afraid of not being with you

I said

Oh!! Baby

that will never happen till my death

I’m always there for you


4 comments:

  1. thank god 1 luv story has a gud end ....nice 1....keep going

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  2. this comment is for both..
    UR WRITING IS VERY FRESH...It Answers All The Questions In Your Mind..Never Expected U ll Write More Gud Than The Usual " BOOZE STUFF "
    in short...
    " EXCELLENT IS D ONLY WORD.. "
    do keep changing ur domain..it will increase Ur Writing Skills :)

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  3. Excellent!!! As in i could relate to the character, jst dat d booze n smoke could be avoided in a few places. I loved it, though....good going!!

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  4. Marvelous!!!The most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched. They must be felt with the heart.

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